There is three men who go out on a quest for fire their names are Nao, Nam and Gaw. In their days they couldn't survive without fire because they needed it to cook and stay warm and since they didn't know how to lite one like we do, they had to find wild fire.
They are sleeping in a cave that they had found when Gaw spots what he thinks is a grey bear, which have been said to strangle a horse with its paws. He quickly warns the others about the approaching bear .
This surprised me bear because i thought three men could easily outwit a bear by running around it all at once while stabbing or clubbing it.
They quickly build a stone wall out of the rocks they had gathered earlier just in case this happened.
It doesn't take the bear long to reach the cave. Probably tired from its days hunting it is annoyed to find a wall in its way and trys to poke his head through the small hole they had left in the wall so they could club it as it came in. But it was immediately hit by the men. Angry it smashes down the weaker part of the wall, runs in and gabs Nam.
When the bear forced its way into the cave i was impressed by it power, even though the wall was built in a hurry and probably wasn't that strong. I was also impressed by the quick thinking of the trio to build the wall in the first place even when they panicked by the bear coming towards them.
The two that were left standing started hitting the bear in the snot and spine making him drop Nam
while the bear was distracted Nam picked up his weapon and started hitting the bear. Naoh finally struck the final blow killing the bear.
In the last paragraph i was shocked. Because now it wouldn't be allowed to be but i understand that they wouldn't of killed a bear unless they had a good reason but they did and it was that they were going to die otherwise, they did it in self defense even though they did steal the bears home.
Good stuff, Alex. Probably a high achieved. To reach merit or ex, you would need to expand on the last comment about why things are different now, or comment on the effectiveness of the writing. Basically - move your comments to a more critical basis.
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